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Post by watchman on Jul 8, 2011 21:24:55 GMT
I was looking at that “Footprints” thing the other day and I realised it was missing something. So I thought I’d take a swing at finishing it. See what you think.
“The LORD replied, my precious, precious child, I Love you and I would never leave you! During your times of trial and suffering when you saw only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you.
The man thought about this.
He thought about it for a long, long time.
Finally he said ,”Bulls*it!”
When the time of trial came, I faced it alone.
There were only one set of footprints because I was standing on my own two feet .
Against all that the world could throw at me.
And I endured.
You? You weren’t there.
You weren’t ever there.
And I didn’t need you.
I never did and I never will.
There came no reply, just silence.
It was then that the man knew .
It had always been … just silence.”
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Post by Ma'amJo on Jul 8, 2011 23:25:52 GMT
How very true, Watchman. I think that's far more powerful than the original, as it focuses on a person's inner strength rather than having them rely on and believe in something that isn't there to get them through life. I definitely prefer your version.
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Post by Amaris on Jul 9, 2011 11:35:04 GMT
I like it If I were brave enough I'd send it to my sister
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Post by morganp on Jul 10, 2011 9:52:59 GMT
Good call Watchman, it's going on my Facebook ;D
morganp
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